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My first MOC-Steam Punked A-wing EDIT: New Pics Up

 
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Zombsta' Bo
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:19 pm    Post subject: My first MOC-Steam Punked A-wing EDIT: New Pics Up Reply with quote

Well, this is really the first SW MOC I've taken seriously. When I heard about Don and dW's contest, I considered entering, knowing I would stand no chance. But, one night I got bored, and made a simple Steam punk'd A-wing starfighter, mostly out of destroyed Harry Potter and Space sets. Comments and critique are welcome.
EDIT: So I finalized it, and entered it into the contest. Critique still welcome.
Folder:V3!!
Annnd, New V3 pic:

Thanks y'all for lookin'.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice! I can see that it's an A-Wing, but only from the top.... can you try to make it resmble it more from the other view?
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks. How do you suggest I make it look more A-wing from the front? The back preety much has it, but I'm stumped on the front.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

maybe make it a little less tall, and more pointy. the prop on the front doesn't help A-Wing pointy at all.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 3:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I thought it was a snowspeeder at first, with the cannon pointing backwards. Laughing
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Agreed, the cannon does lend an air of snowspeeder to it.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really? I just added the cannon for old-ish effect, because the gear/guns din't really satisfy the weapons for the ship. Should I remove it, or what?
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

do you have another cannon? if so, use the 2 on the wings as guns. If not, I don't know what you should do. Making the whole thing less tall seems to be what you should work on though.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 6:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, Rouge13, I fixed it up a little. I'll post pics tommorrow. Basically, I put the cannon on the floor of the vessle, and covered it up a bit.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 10:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Masta' Bo wrote:
Okay, Rouge13, I fixed it up a little. I'll post pics tommorrow. Basically, I put the cannon on the floor of the vessle, and covered it up a bit.

EDIT: Yeah, I got to it today, so here is a modded A-wing:




And the folder: Modded A-wing Folder
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