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Void Fighter (my first EVER Moc)

 
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han clan solo



Joined: 14 Sep 2005
Location: tampa fl

PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 10:31 pm    Post subject: Void Fighter (my first EVER Moc) Reply with quote

Here is my firt evr moc.....it took me a wile to build it .....I think of it as a mix of a-wing and air speeder.

Side,
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/alfa/qwqwqwqwqw/picture_042.jpg

hed on,
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/alfa/qwqwqwqwqw/picture_043.jpg

other sde
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/alfa/qwqwqwqwqw/picture_044.jpg

back (V_D helped me out with the engines0,
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/alfa/qwqwqwqwqw/picture_046.jpg

bottom,
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/alfa/qwqwqwqwqw/picture_047.jpg

Please tll me what you tink of my first SW moc Smile
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Darth Andrew



Joined: 08 Jun 2005
Location: Indiana, U.S.A

PostPosted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 10:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's good for a first MOC, but there is one problem: add some meat to dem bones! If that was ever in combat, it looks like a pebble could shatter it. Add more depth to the ship; there is barely any room for the pilot to drive it comfortably. Makeing it thicker will make it look a lot better. Smile
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ZombieSolo
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Joined: 05 Feb 2005

PostPosted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 1:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I don't think it fits the Voidfigther description, but it would make a great Light Republic Fighter. I agree it could be beefier, but on a limited parts bin you managed a very sleek look. For a first MOC, it's excellent! Builders only get better, and this is an impressive starting point.
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keds



Joined: 06 Nov 2005
Location: nkc-MO

PostPosted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 1:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What I like:
The overall size and shape, very sleek and deadly looking. The big guns on the wingtips.

What I think could use improvement:
The cockpit has a nice smooth line and then it just cuts off at the back with two full brick heights between the top and the engines, some greeble or an inverted slope brick or both might work well here.

Once more imperial funds are obtained, the variety of colors might also be reduced.
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ZombieAndrew
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Joined: 17 Aug 2005
Location: Tampa, UT

PostPosted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 2:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good job Aaron!. Just so you all know he (for some reason) sold all of his legos about a year agao so these are the sets he has ti build from, Hals an arc-170 and parts from my lpha team sets and (my) v-wing custom and the jedi starfighter vs. droid fighter. He refuses to take any of his sets apart (the jedi fighter and v-wing) so right now until christmas his collection is limited because he plays the violin and broke his bow and so he spent all his money getting a new one.
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warhawk
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Joined: 04 Jun 2005
Location: Switzerland

PostPosted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 2:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice first MOC! I rather like the overall design of this ship - the general shape is intriguing and the use of the Alpha Team windscreen is rarely seen in MOCs.

Like others before me mentioned, there are some points that could make it even better. I believe it could do with some more bulk maybe on the underside. A wing that's only one plate thick looks a bit fragile for a ship designed for combat Smile. And in my (admittedly slightly color-blind Razz) eyes, the sand blue and dark red don't work too well together.

Keep up the good work!
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han clan solo



Joined: 14 Sep 2005
Location: tampa fl

PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks for all the comments every one, I am going to try to bulk up my next one alot Smile
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han clan solo



Joined: 14 Sep 2005
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOOKS GOOD JOSH Smile I REALLY LIKE THE PILOT
IT DOES LOOK LIKE A B WING KINDOF
(SORRY EVERYONE BUT I PRESS THE SHIFT KEY FOR A WHILE A NOW I CANT GET CAPS LOCK OFF) :OOPS:
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 11:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uuh, you just posted in your topic not mine ::D:
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